Comments on: Don’t Let Impotence Ruin Your Sex Life

By: CucLops

CucLops — Fri, 25 Dec 2009 11:30:50 +0000

I want to quote your post in my blog. It can?
And you et an account on Twitter?

By: nova

nova — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 13:22:06 +0000

Todd,

Love “her lips fluttering against his hands like the wings of a moth.”

A sense of loss and hope clearly felt here. Well done!

Nit pick – check spelling on the word “lighting” possibly “lightning’?

By: nova

nova — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 13:20:43 +0000

Todd, Compelling story all the way through! George’s wry sense of humor even though his pride is hurt makes him a believable and sympathetic character. I couldln’t put this down. It drew me in.

Love “her lips fluttering against his hands like the wings of a moth.”

A sense of loss and hope clearly felt here. Well done!

Nit pick – check spelling on the word “lighting” possibly “lightning’?

By: mr. bluesmith

mr. bluesmith — Fri, 29 Aug 2008 20:57:38 +0000

I’m glad I got a chance to read your story. I feel like I’ve watched you grow as a writer the past few years and it’s cool to see you getting your name up.

And umm, regarding what Brice said in the comment above mine, I’ve seen a bunch of stuff on those trains myself.

And unfortunately smelled a bunch of stuff, too.

Definitely.

By: Brice

Brice — Thu, 14 Aug 2008 18:16:34 +0000

I’ve seen it on the 1 Train

By: Jude

Jude — Sat, 09 Aug 2008 20:43:36 +0000

Great story! Where can I take a look at that picture in the ad?

By: JaminATL

JaminATL — Fri, 18 Jul 2008 17:32:09 +0000

Wow. Really, really good. I agree. It feels like it could be a chapter in a novel. A novel I’d like to read.

By: ron cherubini

ron cherubini — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 14:56:25 +0000

This is great…really captivating. Would love to read more of your writing. Enjoyed this very much.

By: george keenen

george keenen — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 02:20:27 +0000

I loved this. I’d like to see more from this writer

By: Catherine Todd

Catherine Todd — Mon, 14 Jul 2008 21:03:20 +0000

Mathew wrote: “I really liked the bit about the bruise on Ann’s arm. Really communicated the kind of irrational thoughts you have in those situations.”

Was glad someone picked up on that. For some people it’s not “irrational;” they really believe it! Excellent comment.