Comments on: Noon at the White Castle http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/ A poetry, short story and art showcase. Tue, 13 Dec 2011 10:04:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Maren K. http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/comment-page-1/#comment-37673 Maren K. Sun, 11 May 2008 00:54:17 +0000 http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/#comment-37673 Michael. Thank you. The honesty, the uncertainty, the vulnerability... beautiful encouraging hopeful Michael.
Thank you.
The honesty, the uncertainty, the vulnerability…

beautiful

encouraging

hopeful

]]> By: Edmond http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/comment-page-1/#comment-16347 Edmond Wed, 04 Apr 2007 01:39:06 +0000 http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/#comment-16347 Mmmmmmmmm....white castle. I love the idea of poetry intermixed with sliders. Lovely. A few favorite phrases: dead onions, harmless pup no one feeds, and of course these lines: I like it, but I feel like a cliché when people see me screwing the top off. Who do you think you are? Oh, you must be a WRITER. Yeah, well try a Bic. Thanks for a few moments at WC. I could almost smell the onion rings. Mmmmmmmmm….white castle.

I love the idea of poetry intermixed with sliders.

Lovely.

A few favorite phrases: dead onions, harmless pup no one feeds, and of course these lines:

I like it, but I feel
like a cliché when people see me screwing
the top off. Who do you think you are?
Oh, you must be a WRITER. Yeah, well try a Bic.

Thanks for a few moments at WC. I could almost smell the onion rings.

]]> By: Jessi Alia http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/comment-page-1/#comment-13983 Jessi Alia Wed, 07 Mar 2007 19:21:36 +0000 http://the-beat.co.uk/noon-at-the-white-castle/#comment-13983 Great poem! and good point! we don't take the time to enjoy beauty. How much time do we spend looking at a painting compared to watching tv? Or enjoying a friendly conversation without thinking about what's next on our daily agenda? I have a collection of Robert Frost sitting on my bookshelf, collecting dust...one of those books saved for 'some day'. I am inspired to read that collection, instead of watching the mindless swirl of colors and chatter on TV, and savor the imagery of great words. Thank you. Great poem! and good point! we don’t take the time to enjoy beauty. How much time do we spend looking at a painting compared to watching tv? Or enjoying a friendly conversation without thinking about what’s next on our daily agenda? I have a collection of Robert Frost sitting on my bookshelf, collecting dust…one of those books saved for ’some day’. I am inspired to read that collection, instead of watching the mindless swirl of colors and chatter on TV, and savor the imagery of great words. Thank you.

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