.river.
by James McLaughlin
.febrile. .blue.
.geranium. ..flower.
.wind. ..then.
.blue. .gray.
.tiser. ..leaf.
.thistle. ..light.
.tree. .enervate.
.diurnallly. .water plant.
.sunlight.
.proselytize.
.then. ..sun.
.brio.
.bee. .acerbic.
.sun. ..blue.
.protean. ..heat.
.now.
.shadow.
.water.
.eeled.
sui generis
.then.
.blue.
.sombre.
.vespertine.
.excoriate.
.hyperborean.
.exciled. ..shadows.
.river.
.tree.
.drift.
.blue.
.gray.
.philippic. ..light.

July 13th, 2008 at 10:35 am
Another work of genius.
July 13th, 2008 at 10:36 am
And it’s different from the other poems you have on this site.
July 14th, 2008 at 9:14 am
amazing flow of words, what a talented writer
July 15th, 2008 at 3:12 pm
Cheers Anna I’ve got some stuff coming out at ‘Stride’ magazine soon (shameless plug). Give it a couple of weeks and try …. www.stridemagazine.co.uk
Let me know what you think..
James
July 15th, 2008 at 3:13 pm
I need to stop commenting on my own stuff it’s so sad!!! I can do sad. Hee
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