Women
by Devin McGuire
I sucked face with an older woman last night
and pitched a tent inside my pants
Driving home my tent collapsed
as I contemplated strange randomness
my lips felt bruised in a numb tingle
like a slippery bass tossed back in the pond
How long before I’m hooked again
slammed against the gunwale
dropped into a stinking bucket
to be taken back to camp, and eaten?
Leaning into a wide curve in the road
a speckled faun stood jittering
I hit the brakes hard, as he darted
back to the woods wild and free.

November 28th, 2007 at 5:10 pm
This is a great poem Devin. I love the references to the creatures and nature. However, my favourite line is, “and pitched a tent inside my pants”.
Thank you for giving a few minutes pleasure.
Would like to read more of your poems if you have any.
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